A New member named elle

Just in case you were missing him (didn't say exactly the same thing about 'writing style' here?)

elle

Joined: 31 Jul 2007
Posts: 34

Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 12:08 pm Post subject: Writing
Disguised, First, let me say that I have just re-read your introduction. Second, I believe you have committed an Islamic sin, and that is, to question Mohammed's life and the Hadiths and the Qur'an and the teachings of Islam. So I am not sure what you mean by being a theist. But I like someone who asks questions about things they cannot understand. You have an inquiring mind.

The first comment I have about your writing is, (1) You must change your writing style. You wrote that whole introduction as one paragraph. That made it difficult to read and looked boring. So break it up into smaller paragraphs. Appearance matters as it must be like food, spicy.

Now if you wish to write about your thoughts for others to read, then you have to do a lot of research to make the articles authentic. The next thing is to be able to find space on the Internet, (Free is possible) to display your work. So first you must learn about such sites. Let me introduce you to Google Knol. Here is a link:

http://knol.google.com/k/knol/knol/Help#

Once you have learned about that site, you can write serious stuff about Islam. PM me any time as I am willing to give you any advice on this topic of writing. If you are interested you can read one of my articles:

http://knol.google.com/k/mbp-lee/quranic-ambiguities-analysed/1l23x9udotn1a/8#

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Yes, Disguised, I am here to help you if you are serious.

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Jack Torrance

Reply #240 - November 14, 2008, 06:33 PM

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